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A cold sweat runs down my back,

As I realize that something’s not right.

A feeling consumes my every sense.

Some one is watching me for reasons unknown.

Soon the feeling leaves and I can soon breath,

But it was not the first time it was felt.

Paranoia grips my mind as I think of what may happen,

Only to find nothing wrong where I am.

Normality resumes and I live callused.

The feeling still grips when loneliness comes,

My mind now ready for what happens.

But I soon find that this presence means no foul.

And my angel protects me through heaven and hell.
©2007-2008 ~Akamaru-The-Red
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i hope this one is better than my last...any way to me it means that most things thought bad are blessings in disguise.
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~redglassfire:iconredglassfire: Sep 30, 2007, 8:42:40 PM
Wow...I've read all your poetry, and this one speaks to me the most. You're really good at this stuff, but you should give yourself more credit :)

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~Sinara:iconSinara: Oct 6, 2007, 6:56:42 PM
realy beautiful! I lov it Fav:star:

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~Akamaru-The-Red:iconAkamaru-The-Red: Oct 6, 2007, 6:57:47 PM
lol thank you ^-^

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